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Things that make you go Mmm

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Things that make you go Mmmm...

For all of us these things are different,
For some of us the same,
If you ever tell me what you like,
I promise not to use your name.

Clean, cool sheets after a shower
The feeling you get from a flower
A warm fleece robe in December
The first young kiss you remember

The feel of warm mud on your feet
Sitting in your first cars drivers seat
Hearing your mate say I love you
Finding the Father above you.

Watching the sunset to the west
Feeding your child at your breast
Watching your child graduate
That hot fudge sundea you ate.

These things all ellicit emotion
Some shallow, some as deep as the ocean
But the one that strikes me most often
That helps me relax, to soften
Is a thing that we do, nothing big,or new
Is spoon-sleeping, my back against you.
Just an early morning thought
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jsenn's avatar
Oh, I love this poem. All of these things sort of rock you like a baby in the sound, starting with "clean, cool sheets...". Yes I do love the way you write. There is a wisdom in there "...as deep as the ocean." Very nice! Joy